Brevity

This is an image of a train approaching; making its way through the mist. I've chosen it because it represents the brevity of all things, and the struggle that is life to me.

“This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang but a whimper.”

― T.S. Eliot, The Hollow Men

I pass a graveyard on my way to work each morning,
a desolate place filled with scraps of putrid litter,
devoid of any being but a mangy mongrel
with chipped-off statued cherubs and unclean engravings.
The place is an anathema, infected with jinn,
a place where bones still rattle in decaying coffins.
I think of souls that never leave to paradise; damned
to haunt and own us; souls forever wandering; lost
with no respite each time I see the place, but then a
dissimilar thought takes control and I think – looking
at starless skies – if we indeed have souls or if it’s fable
concocted by robed priests to keep the masses senseless,
I wonder if the past and future have no meaning,
if an opaque void circumscribes existence, birth, death,
if only brevity is the hand we fiercely claw at,
if time meets no continuance, and even the present
is just a ball suspended in vitality that
fades, lessens till millennia and cycles are lost
forever, and all you and I have known disperses,
and worlds end with soft whimpers and never thunderous bangs.

© Nitin Lalit Murali (2019)

6 responses

    • Thank you so much Bojana. This poem reflects a view that I don’t believe in at all, but I just felt like writing it. I’m glad you caught the eeriness of the piece.

  1. Beautifully dark and profoundly philosophical about human existence and time. T.S.Eliot is one of my favorite poets ever and I am glad “The Hollow Men” has inspired you such a marvelous poem.

    • Thank you so much Marta. I actually don’t believe in the philosophy I’ve expounded here, but I just felt like writing it. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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